How'd he get in — Summary

DanteAnxious

A rat is running around in my walls, I could hear his footsteps quick but heavy leaving a trial of misfortune and commotion, how did he end up in there I ask myself Who let him into my walls Is there a hole I do not know about? He gives away his spot and runs down to next open space he can get to before I find him, Leave I tell him and he does not understand Well of course he doesn't, he's a rat I try to reel him out with some cheese and nuts Although those do not satisfy him as much as my thoughts, Please go Mr. Rat I have suffered enough, your running is causing me a headache, My walls are weak and thin Maybe that's why you have ventured in It was an easy spot to lay and you stayed

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On the surface, this is a speaker dealing with a rat that has gotten into the walls of their home. They hear its quick, heavy footsteps, wonder how it got in, and try to coax it out with cheese and nuts. But the rat ignores the food, and the poem hints that something else is going on. The line about the rat preferring "my thoughts" suggests it stands for something inside the speaker's mind, such as anxiety, stress, or a worry that won't leave.

The speaker's mood shifts as the poem goes on. It begins with confusion and irritation, then turns tired and pleading: "I have suffered enough." The ending is quieter and more reflective. The speaker admits the walls are "weak and thin" and that this made it easy for the rat to settle in. That sounds less like blaming the rat and more like blaming their own vulnerability. The mood is uneasy, worn down, and a little resigned.

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