«I wish…» — Summary

deeJuly 4th, 2013Romantic

I wish, that I could carry you in my pocket all day, Like some little good luck charm, Or a leaf, That has some exquisite venation that you find deep in the woods where there's no one around to hear you rustle around in the dead leaves, in order to find the one that's just barely clinging to life, But it's the perfect shade of green to describe just how lucky you feel to have someone who loves you Inexplicably Relentlessly And mostly, because you love them right back.

You are that leaf, That lucky shade of green leaf, Tucked neatly away in the safety of the back pocket of my favorite blue jeans, You are that leaf that represents all that is good within the world , And if I were to ever lose you, If somehow I ripped a stitch in my jeans and lost you to the chaos of the world, I couldn't imagine, Attempting to find, Another green leaf, Amongst the carcasses of dead wishes that lay among the brown leaves on the ground, Deep in the woods, Where no one is around.

I couldn't replace you if I tried, Because you are my leaf, My lucky green leaf that's always there, Reminding me of how to love, With every single absentminded touch, I give you, Just to remind myself that you're still there- that you're still mine.

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The speaker wishes they could keep their loved one close at all times, and finds a way to say it through one image: a perfect green leaf, found deep in the woods and tucked into the back pocket of a favorite pair of jeans. The leaf is small, delicate and lucky, and it stands for everything good in the world. The date line under the title suggests it was written in 2013, though the poem itself never says why.

What comes through most is tenderness mixed with fear. The speaker imagines losing the leaf through a ripped stitch and can't picture finding another among the "carcasses of dead wishes" on the forest floor. That dark phrase makes the loss feel final. By the end, the mood settles into quiet devotion. The "absentminded touch" is a habit of checking the pocket, and the speaker admits it is done to be sure "you're still there" and "still mine." It's a love poem that is warm, a little anxious, and very personal.

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