Way Down — Summary

Way down, Deep in the voids, Deep in the darkness She waits Unseen, Unheard, Unnoticed. Sitting in a room Surrounded by black and white voids Of silence And darkness And loneliness And doubt. Wishing this room Was not a little piece Of blue heaven Surrounded by voids. Wishing she could be up here With the gentle ones. Wishing that she was not Way down, Deep in the darkness. But up here, Most of us don't know That place exists. And most of us don't care, We're too preoccupied. Too busy saying We have it bad, That we've hit the bottom. We call ourselves the gentle ones But we aren't always gentle. We, the gentle ones Are gentle to strangers But we fight each other, Blame each other, Curse each other, Slam the door In each other's faces. Because we don't realize There's a place Way down, Deep in the darkness Surrounded by black and white voids Where a girl waits In the silence And the solitude, Wishing she was with us, The so-called gentle ones.

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Jessea L. Vaughan's "Way Down" starts in a place of isolation: a girl sitting alone in a small room, surrounded by silence, darkness, loneliness and doubt. She is unseen and unheard, and all she wants is to join the people "up here," whom she calls the gentle ones.

Then the poem turns on its readers. The speaker, who is one of "us" above, admits that most people don't know this place exists and wouldn't care if they did. We're too busy complaining that we've hit rock bottom. We also aren't as gentle as we claim, since we're kind to strangers but blame, curse and slam doors on the people closest to us.

The mood is quiet, sad and a little accusing. The repeated "voids" and "way down" make the girl's loneliness feel heavy, while the phrase "so-called gentle ones" at the end leaves a sting. The poem asks us to notice who we overlook while we are absorbed in our own troubles.

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