Difting Out — Summary

Tracing the jagged shore, The serrated outline of broken seam and bridges flamed, To the fragmented rock where, weary, I stayed. Grave in thought of the perjured past Of smiles faded, Severe color clouded by a genesis of truth Arresting the voyage of sleep to glower on what is wrecked. Down here sought some desperate act of escape Beneath the docks who, staked, Found themselves grounded against the oppressive tug of the sea And strengthless I drifted out on a surge of empty fancy.

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The speaker walks a broken shoreline, past burned bridges and jagged rock, and finally stops, worn out, on a fragmented rock. From there the poem turns inward. The speaker brooding over a "perjured past" of faded smiles, and a painful truth has arrived that is too sharp to ignore. It keeps sleep away and forces a stare at "what is wrecked." The poem doesn't say what exactly went wrong, but the imagery suggests a relationship or a trust that has fallen apart.

Down by the docks, the speaker looks for some desperate way out. The staked docks stay fixed in place while the sea pulls hard against them, and the speaker has no such anchor. In the last line, drained of strength, the speaker drifts away on "empty fancy," a daydream that offers escape but no real comfort. The mood is heavy, tired, and bleak, with a sense of giving in rather than breaking free.

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