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paulAnxious

I know you're there but you're invisible most of the time I know you care but I'm afraid to tell you at times tell you about the tales my brain creates because I'm scared scared of you becoming even more invisible than you already are

please don't leave, no matter what I do

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Paul's poem is a quiet, anxious plea addressed to someone who matters deeply but is hard to see. The speaker knows this person is there and believes they care, yet the person is "invisible most of the time." That word could mean many things: someone emotionally distant, someone who is physically absent, or perhaps a presence the speaker only senses. The poem never says which, and that vagueness is part of its power.

The central feeling is fear. The speaker holds back "the tales my brain creates," which suggests racing, worrying thoughts they find hard to share. Telling them feels risky, because it might push the other person even further away. So the speaker stays silent, caught between wanting honesty and wanting to keep the connection.

The mood is fragile and vulnerable. The short lines feel hesitant, like someone choosing words carefully. The ending is the most direct moment: "please don't leave, no matter what I do." It reads as a small, honest request from someone who is afraid of being too much.

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