Drowning in the wake of the rain — Summary

The city was drowning in the suppressed emotions of the heavens above The sky was a blur of grey fur and voluptuous roars The patter of the rain grew louder, and dimmed Like a badly tuned radio. The chatter of the class almost drowned out the din outside. Almost. Volleys of arrows shot towards the roads; The roads glittered like polished lead innocently Almost as if were batting its eyelashes oh-so-cluelessly The rain pounded against every surface And it always bounced off harmlessly The sky split into tendrils of thunder The grey wolves above grew louder; Trees crashed into tar Water clung to legs But nothing could halt the city The battle raged on, unforgiving But no one fell prey to its vicious beauty Except a lone student on a gloomy day Staring through grills that would never give way

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A heavy rainstorm batters a city, and the speaker describes it as a battle. The sky becomes a pack of grey wolves, the rain falls in volleys of arrows, and thunder splits overhead. Trees crash and water clings to people's legs, yet the city carries on. The rain "bounced off harmlessly," and the wet roads seem to flutter their eyelashes, as if the whole assault were innocent or pointless.

The turn comes at the end. Inside, the class is chattering, and the storm is something that almost gets drowned out. Only one student is truly caught by its "vicious beauty," staring out through grills that "would never give way." The poem suggests a feeling of being set apart, watching the world's drama from behind a barrier. The mood is dramatic and wild at first, then quieter and lonelier. The student seems both drawn to the storm and shut away from it, which gives the closing lines a restless, wistful edge.

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