Hell on earth — Summary

To most people Hell is an abstract place. It's a realm of suffering, If pain and torture, And they can only speculate as to what it will be.

I know differently. I have trudged through the halls of the cursed place. I have seen the horrors, Heard the laughter of those demons. And the worst part? It looked just like earth.

One solar rotation since that point, And I still see the visions. Those monsters that tormented me, Hours of running and hiding, But how can you hid from your own mind?

One solar rotation since that point, And I can still hear my brothers, Those that I love with all my heart, Throwing a knife at my feet, Sneering at me and uttering one phrase, "Just end it already you pathetic piece of shit." One solar rotation since that point, And the rupture in my mind is still apparent, Having given birth to my other half, The other "me", It has never closed.

One solar rotation since that point, And I have never truely left that hell. I've said that I was fine, That those visions and sounds, Those sensations felt on that wicked night were gone, But I lied.

I still see them when I close my eyes. I hear them at night, Only sleeping for a few hours at a time. And it is so much worse right now.

One solar rotation since that point, And I'm am still reliving my Hell on earth

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Logan Brosemer's "Hell on earth" is about trauma that refuses to fade. The speaker begins by saying most people imagine hell as an abstract place, then claims to know it firsthand. What makes it frightening is that it "looked just like earth." The poem describes a night of terror, with monsters, hours of hiding, and brothers who throw a knife at the speaker's feet and tell them to end it. The poem doesn't explain what actually happened, so it's unclear how much was real and how much was in the speaker's mind.

The repeated line "One solar rotation since that point" works like a drumbeat, counting a year that hasn't brought healing. The speaker admits they lied about being fine, still sees the visions, barely sleeps, and says things are "so much worse right now." The mood is raw, exhausted, and honest. The unfinished last line, trailing off at "Hell on earth," makes it feel as though the speaker is still trapped inside it.

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